Hi, Maria!
I like your story, though I don't think it will come the day with Marx' utopia.
I don't believe in wild capitalism, nor I am for communism, simple because intelligence cannot be distributed, and more intelligent people will always want to fulfill their dreams in freedom.
To some extent, Western Europe reached a wonderful system at the end of las century --nobody had really lack of something important as the welfare and social security systems worked very well. However, this situation has deteriorated.
Anyway, we are in a kind of "middle age" or intermediate age, where everything we had is questioned. Maybe Mankind has to create a completely new system. We will see what will happen in the next years.
Thank you for this story. ALL the BEST. Louisa.