Louisa Oliveros
Jan 22, 2022

Hi, Byron!

Eventually, today I decided not to work on my papers, but to read and write a little. So, I read this story of yours. Very interesting, but I was feeling fear when describing the scenes of those horrible places and businessmen. Yikes! You have the power of causing strong feelings in your readers, and this is very good for a Writer.

I have been in Africa only once --in Morocco--, but on a guided tour with a Spaniard Agency. I repeat again: I am a deep Westerner. I admire you were brave enough to make business in Africa, and even worst, with Lebanese people in between.

I think I have learned a lot of words from you because today I only looked for 2. I perfectly understood the rest without a problem. Great!

Congrats! This story is very captivating.

ALL the BEST to you. Louisa.

Louisa Oliveros
Louisa Oliveros

Written by Louisa Oliveros

Bilingual English-Spanish Teacher, Content Writer, Translator, and Proofreader. Solopreneur. louisa.free@outlook.com

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