Louisa Oliveros
Jul 18, 2021

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Hi, Byron !

This story is incredible. It shows how privileged we are for having been born in Europe. It is not paradise, but at least my generation --maybe yours, I guess-- doesn't know anything about wars and other terrible things like these. But my parents' generation knew those problems and were scarred by them. Losing childhood or teenage in conflicts like the one in South Sudan leaves horrible emotional wounds.

Poor Boy! Of course, his story has not been written by him, but by you, as structure and vocabulary are quite cultured. I had to go to the dictionary not less than eight times. He, he. I still have to learn better English.

I clapped 3 times or more. I really enjoyed Boy's story, albeit with my heart wriggled.

I really enjoy your stories as your craft is always wonderful. British Education.

ALL the BEST. Louisa.

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Louisa Oliveros
Louisa Oliveros

Written by Louisa Oliveros

Bilingual English-Spanish Teacher, Content Writer, Translator, and Proofreader. Solopreneur. louisa.free@outlook.com

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